As Cinderella turned to see the clock,
There was no more cheer, instead a shock….
The clock stroked midnight,
She knew the drill,
Time to leave the light,
How sorrow she fell….
She ran down the stairs quickly,
Feeling sorry,
Sorry for the prince, for treating him badly,
Now what’s left for him was curiosity….
As she rushed to the dark nest,
Her shoe slips off her feet,
She looks worried at first,
Because the time got beat….
The prince tried to get her,
She had no time to waste,
She left her shoe behind her,
And picked up some pace…..
As Cinderella became a miss,
The prince made a royal promise,
That is to marry anyone who’s,
Whoever that is, that fits the shoe………
As the next day comes,
The prince was ready,
Ready to find his princess,
And the shoe was the key………
All the women tried,
But the work wasn’t light,
Until the prince cried,
Whose feet were right? .......
As the prince made the claim,
He was desperate and ashamed,
Then, along came a man,
With the other shoe in his hand…..
He went to the prince,
And tried both shoe,
They were a complete fit,
And the prince got flu…….
This is a story,
About a prince,
Who was finding his princess,
Unfortunately, Cinderella was not a ‘miss’……….
12 comments:
Haha i got wht u mean..
oooo dah ada blog skrg. nama xnak ayu jek. apapun, poem ni mula2 baca xfhm sgt..
tp lelama, dptla apa yg ko nk ckp. so prince tu jd ke khwn dgn Mr cinderella? haha
aku ingatkan anonymous tu nama orang.
just kidding.
Sky aka abg body sasa (uwek!), nama ni best apa. buat orang curious nak kenal aku.!
btw, kalau dia kahwin, xdela blog ni muncul!
Wassup mr cinderella aka (nk ak gtau k) no need i think. krg kesian kat ko sape dirimu yg sbnrnya. wah, mula2 baca kan, sgka giler ko tau english. wakaka
ko tulis dlm melayu dhla. aku ni kan english br je level 5.
yela2. aku cakap melayu. :)
aku tgk bdk2 AED lain tulis dalam BI, aku pun layan je la.
ala, aku ni pun baru je exempted Ariel.
cian korg kena paksa dgn aku on9 mlm2 buta ni. kata kawan kan.. kui3
wira? hehe
wira= gagah kn? :)
mula2 Putera tu ingat cinderella tu perempuan. tp last2 rupanya cinderella tu lelaki. poem ni tulis masa kat MRSM Jasin/TGB dulu. masa tu, madam suruh cari cerita fairy tales dan edit pasal endingnya..
poem ni ko ada tunjuk kan dulu? 2 perenggan yg last tu kurang ar. kena edit kot..haha
btl2. 2 perenggan lastu kureng ar. sape2 boleh edit kan?
hoit2!!
very nice and well-writen piece u got here..
i'm impressed! ;)
good job dude!!
give urself a pat on the back aite?! =]
hrmm...
makes me wonder.
every girl dreamed of becoming cinderella n end up with prince charming..
does this mean that boys dream of this too??
haahahah!!
2prenggan baru... =]
Stride the man to the royal one,
Skipping on the way with joy,
Face brighter than the sun,
Saying to the prince, ‘Oh boy!’
The prince stares in a trance,
The queen and the people gave a hiss,
This is a story of romance,
But what will happen if the partner is not a miss….?!
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